Just to make sure, I'm not against change or much of the wording Joel has done. This is clearly better than what we have at the moment. But I think something like this needs to be properly discussed before we come to a yes/no conclusion (as I want to prevent us from going over this time and time again).
Outstanding issues for myself: mentioning of .LRN and Ola's comment about the packages, unless we come up with a reason behind including some packages and not others. And make sure (as it is the case at the moment) that we do not mention something twice (as an API and a package).
